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    Unconditional Love

    Unconditional Love

    She gives that unconditional love that no one can't see,
    not even her own man sees.
    She gives that type love where she would move a whole galaxy,
    to find his star type love.
    She gives a love where an outer beauty is less important to her than inner beauty,
    his personality,
    his mind,
    his style.

    She gives a love where she sees no faults
    and only perfection exists of mind, body and spirit.
    A love where she gives naturally, with no skills,
    but just from the strength of her heart.
    She gives a type love where the level of his bank account doesn't justify to her except the level of his interest in her.
    Criminal record, credit report & driving record are just meaningless documents to give false classifications of how one should live but not a factor in love,
    that unconditional love.

    She gives a love where there are no boundaries,
    where there are no right and wrong but only warmth, strength and goods times.
    She gives that love that he can't handle,
    where he won't accept the fact that she loves him
    for who he is but not for what he is.
    She gives that love where she doesn't receive back
    but only prays that he would giver her the time of day.
    She gives a love where he takes her for granted, making her feel slanted
    like the italics in her words, she spits from her soul to explain to him that she is true.

    She gives that type love where she is currently speechless because there aren't enough words to act upon that type of love she shows,
    that unconditional love.

    She gives that type love that he still can’t feel,
    that love where she wants to heal his pain
    but blocks it with a shield, a shield of pride, guilt & shame.
    She gives that love where that’s the only thing,
    she knows how to do and he strips her of that...
    that unconditional love.


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    Only Jah Bless
    - M. Nubian

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    the french do it best
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    Thats so sad :(
    but amazingly written
    I write poetry too ...
    is this from experience?
    Think outside the box,
    stop following trends.
    Be open minded and
    keep making new friends

    I live to love life foreel

 

 

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